SOME TREES
John AshberyThese are amazing: each
Joining a neighbor, as though speech
Were a still performance.
Arranging by chance
To meet as far this morning
From the world as agreeing
With it, you and I
Are suddenly what the trees try
To tell us we are:
That their merely being there
Means something; that soon
We may touch, love, explain.
And glad not to have invented
Such comeliness, we are surrounded:
A silence already filled with noises,
A canvas on which emerges
A chorus of smiles, a winter morning.
Placed in a puzzling light, and moving,
Our days put on such reticence
These accents seem their own defense.
Source-http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88/some-trees.html
Some Trees- The word “Some” in the title could have two
implications, one being- they are some random trees, and the other- they are
some specific or special trees.
“These” refers to some specific trees the poet can see or
imagine as he writes. Think of a fruit vendor selling the fruits displayed
before him- “These fruits are amazing.” The title was referring to some
specific trees.
The colon after the statement: “These are amazing”, describes
the reason why the poet thinks they are amazing, which is- “Each joining a
neighbor, as though speech were a still performance.”
How does the act of speech and joining relate? This is not a
physical connection the poet is talking about but an emotional one. So, these
trees connect to their neighbor as if communicating is a still performance which
is not the case as conversation involves hand gestures and/or facial
expressions too. They are just standing
beside one another, without talking, but still joining each other at an
emotional level. But there’s a comma after the first statement: “each joining a
neighbor, as….” The statement apart from connecting to the next through a simile:
as, is also an independent one in itself. Perhaps they are connecting
physically as well as emotionally.
Also, the line enjambment on “each” could mean that the poet
stresses on the idea that each of these trees are equally unique.
The inclusion of the line “arranging by chance” in the first
stanza could make the reader think at first that it’s the trees that are
arranging something, but as we read further we realize it’s the poet and his muse
for this poem, someone he loves, who are arranging for a meeting. This sudden shift
from describing some trees to his love life could mean he intends to compare
himself and his love to that of the trees growing next to each other.
“Arranging by chance…” , the author and his love have
decided to meet at a place without telling each other about it. May be they
know their schedules and where they would be at what time of the day and decide
to run in to each other making it look like co-incidence. It could be about a
teenage attraction and juvenile things teens do. And as he further writes we
realize they have decided to meet on a morning, but where? “….as far this
morning from the world as agreeing with it…” Their meeting is not fixed at a
particular spot but at a place which will be as far from the world as they agree
(or disagree) with the world. Perhaps he is comparing the idea of arranging
co-incidental meetings to that of the branches of the trees swaying in the wind
and meeting each other at an undefined point and making it look as if it was
the wind (co-incidence) that caused them to meet and not their intentions.
With The second stanza ending with: “you and I are suddenly
what the trees try...” it becomes quite clear that the poet is comparing his love
life to that of the trees growing next to each other.
The idea that the trees
connect to each other without talking and their branches touching each other can be compared to a story the poet is trying to tell
here: He might be standing somewhere under or near “Some Trees” waiting for a co-incidental
meet up with his love and he realizes how much they are like these trees or the what
the trees are trying to tell him about them,
which is- Their merely being there means something .
The mere presence
of the poet and his love next to each other, like the trees, means something.
It was meant to be, it was as destined as the presence of the trees that grew next
to each other without their will or knowledge.
At this point it seems this is not a poem about teenage attraction, it’s
about true love.
And soon, like the trees growing their branches amid each
other’s, the author and his love will also touch, fall in love and explain
their love to each other.
In the last two stanzas, he is glad not to have made a scene
out of this whole affair which could have attracted attention. He wants to be
left alone with his love but they are already surrounded: With a silence filled
with questions to be asked and love to be expressed- the noises, with the smile
lit face of his love on the canvas(vision) of his eyes, and all that under the
light falling from between the rustling leaves of some trees- a moving light.
With his love expressed and accepted, their days become introverted and away
from people. These accents: the seclusion from people, the chorus of smiles;
seem to be defending themselves, explaining on their own, to the people, about
his relationship, without him having to say anything.
Good poem. Good reading. Cheers.
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